Reflection Narrative

I found this peer review to be rather effective because with this paper its all about whether or not the message is clear.Tyler gave me some good advice as to how i should be more descriptive and improve my story. He also received the message but thought it would have been better if i ended more on a story rather than a reflection. I changed the stories so that they were more concise as well as being descriptive. I found the in class learning about taking a sentence and making it concise very important because there was huge long stories that didn't need to be that long. I did find this paper the hardest because i am not good at talking about myself and even more so relating it to a larger point about life.